ext_189749 ([identity profile] nahco3.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] meretricula 2012-05-13 12:37 am (UTC)

my reactions to this fic:

1. grinning
2. seal clapping
3. chatting mer:
I SQUEED
WITH GLEE
MARIO/ROBERTO
sDlkfjldkfjlkdfjg yessssss
I GET WHAT I WANT
4. reading
5. "Oh MARIO HONEY. OH ROBERTO."
6. :D :D :D :D :D

no actually your characterization is AMAZING. case in point:

Sometimes when Roberto was in a bad mood he thought that maybe there was nothing underneath; that there was nothing to Mario but pointless, directionless rage. But he couldn't bring himself to believe it.

and

the tiniest crack in his voice, and Roberto knew it wasn't enough to hang a hope on but he'd never seen the point in gambling on a safe bet.

so many feelings. ugh I love this. thank you thank you thank you.


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