And you are asking me for constructive suggestions? When I am in total happiness already? My eyes cannot possibly get any more starry, and my brain any more incoherent with glee.
"You make Laurence happy," Tharkay said, feeling old and wretchedly world-weary. "Temeraire, you do, I promise you
Waaah! Tharkay, you are so grumpy and sweet and one major BAMF for throwing sulky Laurence overboard, OH MY GOD, he actually did it. And the mentions of Sara were well done too! Melancholy and bittersweet, yeesssss. ;o;
"What?" Tharkay considered himself a quick-witted man, and rarely bewildered; his life had often depended on it. In the case of William Laurence, however, his acuity frequently failed him.
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HEY, YOU, THE SNEAKY ONE OVER THERE.
Date: 2009-08-03 03:37 am (UTC)And you are asking me for constructive suggestions? When I am in total happiness already? My eyes cannot possibly get any more starry, and my brain any more incoherent with glee.
"You make Laurence happy," Tharkay said, feeling old and wretchedly world-weary. "Temeraire, you do, I promise you
Waaah! Tharkay, you are so grumpy and sweet and one major BAMF for throwing sulky Laurence overboard, OH MY GOD, he actually did it. And the mentions of Sara were well done too! Melancholy and bittersweet, yeesssss. ;o;
"What?" Tharkay considered himself a quick-witted man, and rarely bewildered; his life had often depended on it. In the case of William Laurence, however, his acuity frequently failed him.
ilu. <3