Ah, it was such a hot and well-written story =D I love how you wrote their interaction and how your Nole sounds so real! I especially liked how you kept the story rather light and found a fun solution (yes, I suppose bjs are fun XD) despite the fact that both of them suffered a hard loss.
It's amazing to notice you set a great setting and a perfect rhythm for the story to flow so easily. Thank you for posting :)
P.S: I was reading other comments and your replies here too and I just wanted to say that you can always ask for tags in tennisslash in the tag request post. They give players' tags right away and take other tags into consideration :)
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Date: 2009-08-18 05:25 pm (UTC)Ah, it was such a hot and well-written story =D I love how you wrote their interaction and how your Nole sounds so real! I especially liked how you kept the story rather light and found a fun solution (yes, I suppose bjs are fun XD) despite the fact that both of them suffered a hard loss.
It's amazing to notice you set a great setting and a perfect rhythm for the story to flow so easily. Thank you for posting :)
P.S: I was reading other comments and your replies here too and I just wanted to say that you can always ask for tags in tennisslash in the tag request post. They give players' tags right away and take other tags into consideration :)