Ohhhhhh my heart, my heart. It took me a second to realize who you meant by "Dani" but that made the final scene all the more meaningful, once I got it. And I really love how you complicate the bond here, and the moment when Andres bursts out it's like a lightbulb going off, not just for Xavi but for us too. Just...seriously, this is AWESOME.
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Date: 2011-02-20 03:05 am (UTC)